4.24雅思饼图小作文7分范文:游戏销量对比

作者:小朗老师来源:朗阁教育时间:2021-05-05 10:20:59

摘要:饼状图 The graphs below show information about electronic games in South Korea in 2003. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 题目来源:2021年4月24日大陆雅思小作文

饼状图

The graphs below show information about electronic games in South Korea in 2003.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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题目来源:2021年4月24日大陆雅思小作文


题目大意:

下面的图表显示了2003年韩国的游戏销量在不同性别和年龄的对比,以及不同游戏的销量。


*范文示例:

开始段 - 改写题目:

The three pie chars illustrate the information about electronic gamers and best-selling games in South Korea in 2003.


概述段:比较受欢迎的年龄段、男性玩家多于女性、比较受欢迎的游戏类型

Overall, electronic games were most popular with 18-to-35-year-old young people and the number of male game players was much larger than that of their female counterparts. Moreover, action games were the top-selling games of the year .


细节段-1:年龄和性别分别的人数占比   

It is clear from the first diagram that people aged between 18 and 35 years old accounted for the largest proportion of total game players at 42%, followed by under-18s ( 35%) and over-35s (23%). The second graph shows that gender-wise, males far outnumbered females, constituting the large majority (72%) of the total electronic game consumers.


细节段-2:不同类型的游戏销量占比描述 

The third pie chart gives information about the best-selling electronic game types and their sales proportion. Out of the top 5 games, action was the most preferred game genre, whose sales were just under half (42%) of total sales, twice as much as the next most popular game type — sports (21%). Meanwhile, the figure for racing games was slightly lower at 17% and the sales percentages for education and role play games were exactly the same at 7%. Compared with the top 5 best-selling games, the rest combined only contributed 6% to the total sales.  

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